In this rough cut of the phone call from Rory's point of view I have used elements of cinematography and sound to emphasise the use of the conventions of film noir in my film. The last shot of Rory shows a zoom out as Rory speaks through the use of an inner monologue. Inner Monologues are used in film noir to give the audience a form of dramatic irony, the audience will know something which characters in the play do not know themselves.
Some good Film noir examples of inner monologue are shown here, to demonstrate how effective they can be and to show the effect I am looking for:
B'rief Encounter' 1945 David Lean
'Saturday Night and Sunday morning' 1960 Karel Reisz
'Psycho' 1960 Alfred Hitchcock
Monday, 17 December 2012
Tuesday, 20 November 2012
Music for my short film
I have been researching some backing music for my short film. The music needs to play either separately or continuously throughout the entire sequence including the 3 major scenes, opening and closing credit sequences.
I have been looking firmly on Shostakovitch's work especially his fifth symphony, all four movements have interested me, especially the first movement - 'Moderato' and the third 'Largo'
I like these pieces because of their dramatic and harsh tones and I believe that they might add very useful dramatic tones to my film.
I have been looking firmly on Shostakovitch's work especially his fifth symphony, all four movements have interested me, especially the first movement - 'Moderato' and the third 'Largo'
I like these pieces because of their dramatic and harsh tones and I believe that they might add very useful dramatic tones to my film.
Monday, 19 November 2012
Shooting Schedule final draft
Shot
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Description
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Checked
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1
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Rose walking down the street & on the phone.
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YES
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2
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Mickey sneaking up on Rose.
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YES
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3
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Rose acknowledging and recognising Mickey.
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DIDN'T USE
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4
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Mickey knocking rose out.
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YES
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5
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Rose laying on the floor.
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YES
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First scene
Second Scene
6
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Rose tied to a chair as Mickey stares at photographs.
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YES
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7
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Mickey Putting head in hands
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YES
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8
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Dissolve to clock.
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YES
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9
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Mickey taking picture off the wall
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YES
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10
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Dissolve to clock.
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YES
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11
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Mickey talking to Rose.
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YES
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12
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Rose looking upset and shocked.
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DIDN'T USE
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13
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Mickey dialling phone.
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YES
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14
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*Rory answering.
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YES
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15
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Mickey talking to Rory.
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YES
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16
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*Rory talking to Mickey.
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YES
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17
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Mickey talking to Rory.
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YES
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18
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*Rory talking to Mickey.
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YES
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19
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Mickey talking to Rory.
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YES
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20
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*Rory talking to Mickey.
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YES
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21
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Mickey talking to Rory.
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YES
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22
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*Rory talking to Mickey.
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YES
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23
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Mickey talking to Rory.
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YES
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24
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*Rory talking to Mickey.
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YES
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25
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Rose looking shocked as Mickey talks to Rory.
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DIDN'T USE
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26
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Mickey Hangs up.
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DIDN'T USE
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27
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*Shot of Rory on his couch.
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YES
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28
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*Shot of Rory’s face as he speaks to himself.
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ZOOM FROM LAST SHOT
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Final scene
29
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Rory walks alone in an empty car park.
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YES
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30
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Rory meets up with Mickey and Rose who is tied to a chair.
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YES
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31
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Close up of Mickeys face as he greets Rory.
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YES
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32
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Close up of Rory’s face as he is shocked and talks to Mickey.
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YES
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33
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Shot of Rose as she looks upset as Rory talks about her to Mickey.
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YES
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34
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Close up of Mickey as he talks to Rory angrily.
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YES
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35
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Close up of Rory as he Talks to Mickey angrily
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YES
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36
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Close up of Mickey as he talks to Mickey angrily.
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YES
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37
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Close up of Rory as he is shocked and tries to reason with Mickey
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YES
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38
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Close up of Mickey reacting to Rory angrily.
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YES
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39
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Long shot of Mickey revealing a knife.
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YES
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40
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Two shot of Mickey running towards Rory with the knife.
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YES
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41
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Two shot of Mickey lunging at Rory with the knife and Rory hitting him to the floor.
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YES
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42
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Shot of Rory picking up Mickey’s dropped knife.
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YES
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43
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Shot of Rory releasing Rose of her bonds.
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YES
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44
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Shot of Rose running away.
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YES
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45
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Medium shot of Mickey getting up and speaking to Rory Angrily.
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YES
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46
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Two shot of Mickey punching Rory and Rory stabbing Mickey in self defence
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YES
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47
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Two shot of Mickey kneeling to the floor dying and Rory throwing the knife away.
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YES
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48
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Two shot of Rory kneeling over Mickey’s dying body.
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DIDN'T USE
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49
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Long Shot of Rory walking away and dropping knife
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YES
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Final Cut - First Draft
This is all the shots that I have taken for my A2 Film Studies short film, this is without the audio added; backing track, and voice over dubbing are not included. Also the opening and closing credits are not included.
Opening Sequence first draft
This is the opening scene for my a2 media studies where MICKEY captures ROSE and decides he needs help hiding her.
Monday, 12 November 2012
New scene with subtitles
This is the final scene of my short film but with added subtitles so that the actors doing the voice over can read the screen and see the exact words the actor on screen is saying and they can read and add the words.
Sunday, 11 November 2012
Film Noir codes and conventions
This is a slideshow I found on the internet (slideshare.net) and I have found it to be very helpful when considering the codes and conventions of film noir and introducing the techniques that are used into my film.
Thursday, 8 November 2012
ROUGHS
This is a rough, of the phone call scene from Rory's point of view, of my creative project, The only editing effect added to the shots, after they where cut and placed together, was the process of changing them to black and white and adding a black screen between shots to symbolize where the shots from the other side of the phone call will be placed.
This is a rough of the final scene of my creative project, The only editing effect added to the shots, after they where cut and placed together, was the process of changing them to black and white and a slight blurring effect on one of the actors faces in a particular shot as the actor was looking at the camera. The sound was not enabled in this scene and I will use voice overs to dub in the dialogue.
Shooting schedule and marks on completion so far
Shot
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Description
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Checked
|
1
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Rose walking down the street & on the phone.
|
|
2
|
Mickey sneaking up on Rose.
|
|
3
|
Rose acknowledging and
recognising Mickey.
|
|
4
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Mickey knocking rose out.
|
|
5
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Rose laying on the floor.
|
First scene
Second Scene
6
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Rose tied to a chair
as Mickey stares at photographs.
|
|
7
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Mickey pacing up and
down the room.
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8
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Dissolve to clock.
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9
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Mickey pacing looking
more worried.
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10
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Dissolve to clock.
|
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11
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Mickey talking to Rose.
|
|
12
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Rose looking upset and
shocked.
|
|
13
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Mickey dialling phone.
|
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14
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*Rory answering.
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YES
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15
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Mickey talking to
Rory.
|
|
16
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*Rory talking to
Mickey.
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YES
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17
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Mickey talking to Rory.
|
|
18
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*Rory talking to
Mickey.
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YES
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19
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Mickey talking to Rory.
|
|
20
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*Rory talking to
Mickey.
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YES
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21
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Mickey talking to Rory.
|
|
22
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*Rory talking to
Mickey.
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YES
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23
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Mickey talking to Rory.
|
|
24
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*Rory talking to
Mickey.
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YES
|
25
|
Rose looking shocked
as Mickey talks to Rory.
|
|
26
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Mickey Hangs up.
|
|
27
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*Shot of Rory on his
couch.
|
YES
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28
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*Shot of Rory’s face
as he speaks to himself.
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YES
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Final scene
29
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Rory walks alone in an
empty car park.
|
YES
|
30
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Rory meets up with
Mickey and Rose who is tied in the boot of a car.
|
YES
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31
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Close up of Mickeys
face as he greets Rory.
|
YES
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32
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Close up of Rory’s
face as he is shocked and talks to Mickey.
|
YES
|
33
|
Shot of Rose as she
looks upset as Rory talks about her to Mickey.
|
YES
|
34
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Close up of Mickey as
he talks to Rory angrily.
|
YES
|
35
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Close up of Rory as he
Talks to Mickey angrily
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YES
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36
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Close up of Mickey as
he talks to Mickey angrily.
|
YES
|
37
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Close up of Rory as he
is shocked and tries to reason with Mickey
|
YES
|
38
|
Close up of Mickey
reacting to Rory angrily.
|
YES
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39
|
Long shot of Mickey
revealing a knife.
|
YES
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40
|
Two shot of Mickey
running towards Rory with the knife.
|
YES
|
41
|
Two shot of Mickey
lunging at Rory with the knife and Rory hitting him to the floor.
|
YES
|
42
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Shot of Rory picking
up Mickey’s dropped knife.
|
YES
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43
|
Shot of Rory releasing
Rose of her bonds.
|
YES
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44
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Shot of Rose running
away.
|
|
45
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Medium shot of Mickey
getting up and lunging towards Rory Angrily.
|
YES
|
46
|
Two shot of Mickey
grabbing Rory and Rory stabbing Mickey in self defence
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YES
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45
| Long shot of Mickey's dead body and Rory walking away. | YES |
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